Dream Deep

... is anyone here interested in/going to college for/ intending to go to college for mathematics? It would be interesting to know... ^_^ Plus I have an idea in this ...

But you've observed girls, haven't you, fancying men they admire - older?... Ah... I sense an insinuation. ^_~

A critique? No worries at all, DD. ^_^'' Any brief remark is fine as well, You've been busy enough as it is. ^_~ (Livny, Shan...deadlines. #_#) ...That really doesn't mean ...

See how much we all love you? :wink:

Muahahahaha. Imp's turn. Happy [early] birthday, my fine Imp! (I believe it's the 22nd of September...) :razz: Cake for you!

Myth and I are actually twins in disguise. ^_~ XD So I suppose the word is that you need some proofreading...

I think they all like you, Pros... ^_^

I'm with Niamh. ^_^ XD

Ahhhh... the weekend in Maryland without computer access did me in. ^_^ Good for you, Wiggy! :wink: *does polka with Wiggy*

Just a really quick comment, Dynamo, because I've gotta run shortly: you want to watch your tenses. It's a pretty noticeable problem where it occurs because it disrupts the flow ...

Sorry for the delay on critting, my fine Imp, but I finally got it printed out, so I'll get you a crit on Monday, hopefully. ^_^

I printed it out, Binky, so I'll get you a crit written up by Monday. ^_^ Hope it will help!

I printed it out, Myth, so I'll get you a crit written up over the weekend! ^_^ I figure you deserve a nice hefty one, in return for the fine ...

Short and sweet, Pheonixfire. Very nively done, but perhaps one thing to look at... Breathing out And breathing in The world is ever, Ever turning On this water-world we spin ...

That's what you think... :wink: I await eagerly as always the next installment (the desperation scene, no?) and if you find yourself in need of a long crit/suggestions, feel free ...